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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[<p>Hello there,</p><p>I&#039;m looking for some criticism on these tracks - keep in mind that only &quot;Chip-hop&quot; and &quot;Made it!&quot; are finished, most of the other ones are nearly finished, though some are just sketches.</p><p>I&#039;m particularly struggling with &quot;OcSID&quot;, it&#039;s got great moments imo but not well tied together, any hint welcome (or any comment or any other track!)</p><p><a href="http://soundcloud.com/yan_g/sets/yqn-chiptune/" target="_blank">http://soundcloud.com/yan_g/sets/yqn-chiptune/</a></p><p>Cheers!</p>]]></content>
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			<updated>2011-06-29T11:28:23Z</updated>
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