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	<title type="html"><![CDATA[ChipMusic.org - New chiptuner looking for some feedback/criticism.]]></title>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: New chiptuner looking for some feedback/criticism.]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[<p>Yeah that&#039;s a valid point. I hear a lot of the music very naturally but I struggle with the bass lines; gotta work on that. Thanks for the feedback man.</p>]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[Simon Watson]]></name>
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			<updated>2011-07-01T19:56:24Z</updated>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: New chiptuner looking for some feedback/criticism.]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[<p>Well, on both tunes I kept waiting for a bass line to come in.&nbsp; So a bass might be nice.&nbsp; But, hey, I play bass so I&#039;m always waiting for the bass line.</p>]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[roboctopus]]></name>
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			<updated>2011-07-01T19:43:00Z</updated>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[New chiptuner looking for some feedback/criticism.]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[<p>What&#039;s up everyone? Just recently started delving into the world of chip music composition despite having been a fan of the art for years. Would basically just love to hear whatever thoughts you have (if any) on some of my tunes. Here&#039;s the link to my chiptunes set on soundcloud: <a href="http://snd.sc/l6nUUf" target="_blank">http://snd.sc/l6nUUf</a>. Some of my songs can also be found in the music section...</p><p>Thanks.</p><p>-Simon</p><p>EDIT: Perhaps, to be a little more specific,&nbsp; I&#039;m particularly interested in the reception of my songs &#039;Dance-Bit&#039; and &#039;Particle Duality&#039;.</p>]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[Simon Watson]]></name>
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			<updated>2011-07-01T19:20:42Z</updated>
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