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	<title type="html"><![CDATA[ChipMusic.org - Constructive Criticism Needed]]></title>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: Constructive Criticism Needed]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[<div class="quotebox"><cite>ChipsChallengeBand wrote:</cite><blockquote><p>It&#039;s not interesting, especially your drums</p><p>and then at 1:20~ish this weird lead comes in and it sounds like it&#039;s clashing with whatever key you were in, doesn&#039;t sound good</p><p>idk</p></blockquote></div><p>thanks for pointing that out. <img src="https://chipmusic.org/forums/img/smilies/smile.png" width="15" height="15" alt="smile" /></p>]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[kymaz]]></name>
				<uri>https://chipmusic.org/kymaz</uri>
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			<updated>2012-03-31T01:20:30Z</updated>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: Constructive Criticism Needed]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[<p>It&#039;s not interesting, especially your drums</p><p>and then at 1:20~ish this weird lead comes in and it sounds like it&#039;s clashing with whatever key you were in, doesn&#039;t sound good</p><p>idk</p>]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[ChipsChallengeBand]]></name>
				<uri>https://chipmusic.org/ChipsChallengeBand</uri>
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			<updated>2012-03-31T01:05:08Z</updated>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Constructive Criticism Needed]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[<p>i know my track is not great but i need someone to give me some constructive criticism on my track because i need to know how good it is and which part is not good and all that other stuff from another person&#039;s view so that i can improve my music. <img src="https://chipmusic.org/forums/img/smilies/smile.png" width="15" height="15" alt="smile" /><br /><a href="http://chipmusic.org/kymaz/music/nebulae" target="_blank">http://chipmusic.org/kymaz/music/nebulae</a></p>]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[kymaz]]></name>
				<uri>https://chipmusic.org/kymaz</uri>
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			<updated>2012-03-30T16:46:06Z</updated>
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