<![CDATA[ChipMusic.org - Need opinion on my melodies]]> 2012-04-23T01:01:17Z PunBB https://chipmusic.org/forums/topic/6831/need-opinion-on-my-melodies/ <![CDATA[Re: Need opinion on my melodies]]> defiantsystems wrote:
ClairBear wrote:

Taking away the melody I can see why and taking out the commands will make the notes sound shitty so I would have to come up with something new to make which isn't a big deal. I'm not trying to disagree with you maybe I should come up with something else

You can use the same notes just edit the instrument.

Chainsaw Police wrote:
ClairBear wrote:

Taking away the melody I can see why and taking out the commands will make the notes sound shitty so I would have to come up with something new to make which isn't a big deal. I'm not trying to disagree with you maybe I should come up with something else

Try the L command (perhaps L02 / L03?) on a few of the notes.

Thanks for the advice I'll start playing around with it also I uploaded a better recording of them

]]> https://chipmusic.org/ClairBear 2012-04-23T01:01:17Z https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/101838/#p101838 <![CDATA[Re: Need opinion on my melodies]]> ClairBear wrote:

Taking away the melody I can see why and taking out the commands will make the notes sound shitty so I would have to come up with something new to make which isn't a big deal. I'm not trying to disagree with you maybe I should come up with something else

Try the L command (perhaps L02 / L03?) on a few of the notes.

]]> https://chipmusic.org/Chainsaw+Police 2012-04-23T00:39:56Z https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/101836/#p101836 <![CDATA[Re: Need opinion on my melodies]]> ClairBear wrote:

Taking away the melody I can see why and taking out the commands will make the notes sound shitty so I would have to come up with something new to make which isn't a big deal. I'm not trying to disagree with you maybe I should come up with something else

You can use the same notes just edit the instrument.

]]> https://chipmusic.org/defiantsystems 2012-04-22T21:40:34Z https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/101821/#p101821 <![CDATA[Re: Need opinion on my melodies]]> they're both great

]]> https://chipmusic.org/Boner 2012-04-22T21:17:40Z https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/101816/#p101816 <![CDATA[Re: Need opinion on my melodies]]> Taking away the melody I can see why and taking out the commands will make the notes sound shitty so I would have to come up with something new to make which isn't a big deal. I'm not trying to disagree with you maybe I should come up with something else

]]> https://chipmusic.org/ClairBear 2012-04-22T18:38:03Z https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/101792/#p101792 <![CDATA[Re: Need opinion on my melodies]]> By nix I mean just remove the P commands. It's taking away from the melody.

]]> https://chipmusic.org/defiantsystems 2012-04-22T18:19:34Z https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/101784/#p101784 <![CDATA[Re: Need opinion on my melodies]]> Yes, I just didn't get the definition "Nix"

]]> https://chipmusic.org/ClairBear 2012-04-22T17:37:09Z https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/101777/#p101777 <![CDATA[Re: Need opinion on my melodies]]> Are you using the P command?

]]> https://chipmusic.org/defiantsystems 2012-04-22T17:07:46Z https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/101774/#p101774 <![CDATA[Re: Need opinion on my melodies]]> What do you mean by "Nix that pitch" ?

]]> https://chipmusic.org/ClairBear 2012-04-22T17:06:45Z https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/101772/#p101772 <![CDATA[Re: Need opinion on my melodies]]> I'm partial to the 1st.  The only thing that's taking away from it is your use of the Pitch command. Nix that pitch shifting altogether and you have yourself one hell of a melody. As far as the second melody goes, I'm not digging it. It's probably just my bias to underdeveloped instruments in LSDJ but I just think your first melody sounded much better.

]]> https://chipmusic.org/defiantsystems 2012-04-22T13:56:39Z https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/101750/#p101750 <![CDATA[Re: Need opinion on my melodies]]> Thanks for the advice. The wave channel is one of the channels that I have hard times with especially with the first song. I'm not too sure if both of these could be intros though I imagine them being after intros

]]> https://chipmusic.org/ClairBear 2012-04-22T08:10:21Z https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/101719/#p101719 <![CDATA[Re: Need opinion on my melodies]]> I wouldn't really call the first one a "melody" so much as a "riff" but it's pretty cool! I like the other one more cause it's all bouncy and cheerful but they both sound just like intros to bigger things. What you do with them is up to you, but my advice is to fill out the stereo image with some panning and get a good understanding of the wav channel; you can get some real energy out of it!

]]> https://chipmusic.org/Victory+Road 2012-04-22T07:45:34Z https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/101718/#p101718 <![CDATA[Re: Need opinion on my melodies]]> They're very short so I thought it wasn't really necessary but I can

Edit: One of the rule do say "Finished compositions only. Unmastered or "need's work" is ok." but these are just melodies and not complete at all

]]> https://chipmusic.org/ClairBear 2012-04-22T05:42:04Z https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/101716/#p101716 <![CDATA[Re: Need opinion on my melodies]]> Why didn't you just post them here?

]]> https://chipmusic.org/HimsyPimsy 2012-04-22T05:38:18Z https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/101715/#p101715 <![CDATA[Need opinion on my melodies]]> I don't have any music making experience but this is my first time making something good out of LSDJ. They're not full songs at all but just a few second looping melodies that I'm having a hard time making them into full songs and I need a opinion on how good they're sounding. I have two melodies with bad recording quality out of male to male cord recorded on Audacity so if it's hard to give opinion due to the quality I could record the channels separately.


http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?dn5jl3i84cwibrf

This is the first melody I ever made that sounds good (to me reminds me of Knife City) I didn't use a WAVE channel about 7 seconds of it


http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?mqxwae2ty32fmdb

And this second one sounds like a very simple NES melody that's 9 seconds


Any advice would be great (cause I suck)!

]]> https://chipmusic.org/ClairBear 2012-04-22T05:17:49Z https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/101714/#p101714