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	<title type="html"><![CDATA[ChipMusic.org - Noob Looking for Criticism]]></title>
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	<updated>2012-04-24T05:05:50Z</updated>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: Noob Looking for Criticism]]></title>
			<link rel="alternate" href="https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/102068/#p102068"/>
			<content type="html"><![CDATA[<p>eight bit collective was a chip music forum and sharing site very similar to this one</p>]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[Downstate]]></name>
				<uri>https://chipmusic.org/Downstate</uri>
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			<updated>2012-04-24T05:05:50Z</updated>
			<id>https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/102068/#p102068</id>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: Noob Looking for Criticism]]></title>
			<link rel="alternate" href="https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/102044/#p102044"/>
			<content type="html"><![CDATA[<div class="quotebox"><cite>ChiBear wrote:</cite><blockquote><p>Would you mind linking an example of a song that you find to be excellent in all of the aspects that I fell short (a good song in your opinion)?</p></blockquote></div><p>I would be happy to list several examples.&nbsp; Keep in mind these are the kind of things I like, but what makes a &quot;good&quot; song is completely dependent on the person.&nbsp; You can whatever style of music you want.</p><div class="spoilerbox" id="spoiler9380018"><h3 onclick="$('#spoilerbox9380018').css('display','block');$('#spoiler9380018').css('display','none')">&#8250; Show Spoiler</h3></div><div class="spoilerbox" id="spoilerbox9380018" style="display:none"><h3 onclick="$('#spoilerbox9380018').css('display','none');$('#spoiler9380018').css('display','block')">&#8249; Hide Spoiler</h3><p>Octapus<br /><div class="embed_video"><iframe width="560" height="340" src="https://www.youtube.com/embed/ua_4D3UqpYY" frameborder="0" webkitallowfullscreen mozallowfullscreen allowfullscreen></iframe></div></p><p>Chipocrite - downloadable <a href="http://cheesenbeer.bandcamp.com/album/hit-and-run-cnb-special-edition" target="_blank">here</a>.<br /><div class="embed_video"><iframe width="560" height="340" src="https://www.youtube.com/embed/h8DiKHrbbEI" frameborder="0" webkitallowfullscreen mozallowfullscreen allowfullscreen></iframe></div></p><p>Knife City - downloadable <a href="http://knifecity.bandcamp.com/" target="_blank">here</a>.<br /><div class="embed_video"><iframe width="560" height="340" src="https://www.youtube.com/embed/aqDHveF0pg0" frameborder="0" webkitallowfullscreen mozallowfullscreen allowfullscreen></iframe></div></p><p>This is a song called &quot;Raccoon&quot; by Ro-bear.&nbsp; You can download his album <a href="http://ro-bear.bandcamp.com/" target="_blank">here</a>.<br /><div class="embed_video"><iframe width="560" height="340" src="https://www.youtube.com/embed/hcLJlRN-4RA" frameborder="0" webkitallowfullscreen mozallowfullscreen allowfullscreen></iframe></div></p><p>EDIT: Ben reminded me, Zef.&nbsp; Download his releases <a href="http://zef-music.bandcamp.com/album/ground-zero" target="_blank">here</a>.<br /><div class="embed_video"><iframe width="560" height="340" src="https://www.youtube.com/embed/x1r2bSwR9Ks" frameborder="0" webkitallowfullscreen mozallowfullscreen allowfullscreen></iframe></div></p></div><p>I&#039;ve listed only artists that use Gameboys (computer in the case of Octapus), but personally I like musicians that combine that sound with other, &quot;normal&quot; instruments.&nbsp; But these guys I listed, and even more, are capable of making tons of interesting stuff using just one Gameboy.</p><p>What are you using to make your songs?&nbsp; Just curious; obviously you don&#039;t have to use a gameboy</p>]]></content>
			<author>
				<name><![CDATA[ChipsChallengeBand]]></name>
				<uri>https://chipmusic.org/ChipsChallengeBand</uri>
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			<updated>2012-04-24T01:48:04Z</updated>
			<id>https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/102044/#p102044</id>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: Noob Looking for Criticism]]></title>
			<link rel="alternate" href="https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/102039/#p102039"/>
			<content type="html"><![CDATA[<div class="quotebox"><cite>Solarbear wrote:</cite><blockquote><div class="quotebox"><cite>ChiBear wrote:</cite><blockquote><p>Solarbear 8bc a.k.a. eight bit collective was a chip music forum and sharing site very similar to this one.</p></blockquote></div><p>First rule of Figh.....chipmusic.org:<br />You do not talk about 8bc.</p><p><img src="https://chipmusic.org/forums/img/smilies/heart.gif" width="15" height="15" alt="heart" /> Welcome to your new home, brethren.</p></blockquote></div><p>I&#039;m pretty sure the rule is: &quot;If 8bc is mentioned in any post or you just feel like it, proceed to rag on the the community even though most of the people who were there are here now.&quot;</p><p>I&#039;ve never understood the hate, I still don&#039;t. 8bc was a&#039;ight.</p>]]></content>
			<author>
				<name><![CDATA[defiantsystems]]></name>
				<uri>https://chipmusic.org/defiantsystems</uri>
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			<updated>2012-04-24T01:02:28Z</updated>
			<id>https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/102039/#p102039</id>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: Noob Looking for Criticism]]></title>
			<link rel="alternate" href="https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/102014/#p102014"/>
			<content type="html"><![CDATA[<p>No offense taken at all, I just wanted to get an honest opinion from the members here and that what you did. I respect it and will keep it in mind for the next songs that I work on. </p><p>Would you mind linking an example of a song that you find to be excellent in all of the aspects that I fell short (a good song in your opinion)?</p><p>Eight Bit makes me sick all hail Chipmusic =P</p>]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[ChiBear]]></name>
				<uri>https://chipmusic.org/ChiBear</uri>
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			<updated>2012-04-23T23:23:36Z</updated>
			<id>https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/102014/#p102014</id>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: Noob Looking for Criticism]]></title>
			<link rel="alternate" href="https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/101989/#p101989"/>
			<content type="html"><![CDATA[<p>so I finally listened so here&#039;s some criticism</p><p>opinion: it&#039;s boring (your melody) and it&#039;s boring (because it&#039;s repetitive)</p><p>you fade in some drum sounds halfway through but nothing changes melodically or structurally</p><p>if I wanted to listen to a loop I could put on the cave story soundtrack</p><p>or any other game soundtrack I only said cave story because I played it recently and it has some very good loops but lots of games have good loops</p><p>like, look at the mario brothers they had good loops</p><p>so yeah that&#039;s what I feel in my heart and I hope this isn&#039;t representative of your body of work because this wasn&#039;t very good (in my opinion maybe other people like it idk you said 8bc liked it)</p><p>SO I listened to it again after I typed all that out it sounds like you add another melody on top halfway through but you&#039;re not using different instruments so I can&#039;t really hear any of the changes you possibly made</p><p>so I stand by what I said don&#039;t take it too harsh broseph</p>]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[ChipsChallengeBand]]></name>
				<uri>https://chipmusic.org/ChipsChallengeBand</uri>
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			<updated>2012-04-23T20:25:46Z</updated>
			<id>https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/101989/#p101989</id>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: Noob Looking for Criticism]]></title>
			<link rel="alternate" href="https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/101972/#p101972"/>
			<content type="html"><![CDATA[<div class="quotebox"><cite>ChipsChallengeBand wrote:</cite><blockquote><p>definitely need sarcasm punctuation</p></blockquote></div><p>I feel like a dick now, haha.</p>]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[Solarbear]]></name>
				<uri>https://chipmusic.org/Solarbear</uri>
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			<updated>2012-04-23T19:11:34Z</updated>
			<id>https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/101972/#p101972</id>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: Noob Looking for Criticism]]></title>
			<link rel="alternate" href="https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/101971/#p101971"/>
			<content type="html"><![CDATA[<p>definitely need sarcasm punctuation</p>]]></content>
			<author>
				<name><![CDATA[ChipsChallengeBand]]></name>
				<uri>https://chipmusic.org/ChipsChallengeBand</uri>
			</author>
			<updated>2012-04-23T19:03:07Z</updated>
			<id>https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/101971/#p101971</id>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: Noob Looking for Criticism]]></title>
			<link rel="alternate" href="https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/101968/#p101968"/>
			<content type="html"><![CDATA[<div class="quotebox"><cite>ChiBear wrote:</cite><blockquote><p>Solarbear 8bc a.k.a. eight bit collective was a chip music forum and sharing site very similar to this one.</p></blockquote></div><p>First rule of Figh.....chipmusic.org:<br />You do not talk about 8bc.</p><p><img src="https://chipmusic.org/forums/img/smilies/heart.gif" width="15" height="15" alt="heart" /> Welcome to your new home, brethren.</p>]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[Solarbear]]></name>
				<uri>https://chipmusic.org/Solarbear</uri>
			</author>
			<updated>2012-04-23T18:56:42Z</updated>
			<id>https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/101968/#p101968</id>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: Noob Looking for Criticism]]></title>
			<link rel="alternate" href="https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/101964/#p101964"/>
			<content type="html"><![CDATA[<div class="quotebox"><cite>ChiBear wrote:</cite><blockquote><p> Solarbear 8bc a.k.a. eight bit collective was a chip music forum and sharing site very similar to this one.</p></blockquote></div><p>lol</p>]]></content>
			<author>
				<name><![CDATA[PULSELOOPER]]></name>
				<uri>https://chipmusic.org/PULSELOOPER</uri>
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			<updated>2012-04-23T18:47:11Z</updated>
			<id>https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/101964/#p101964</id>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: Noob Looking for Criticism]]></title>
			<link rel="alternate" href="https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/101962/#p101962"/>
			<content type="html"><![CDATA[<p>First off thank you everyone and lol! Yeah I name my songs very random things just a habit I have. Solarbear 8bc a.k.a. eight bit collective was a chip music forum and sharing site very similar to this one.</p><p>=]</p>]]></content>
			<author>
				<name><![CDATA[ChiBear]]></name>
				<uri>https://chipmusic.org/ChiBear</uri>
			</author>
			<updated>2012-04-23T18:39:58Z</updated>
			<id>https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/101962/#p101962</id>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: Noob Looking for Criticism]]></title>
			<link rel="alternate" href="https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/101955/#p101955"/>
			<content type="html"><![CDATA[<p>Great song, but the Cosby picture is just hilarious.</p>]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[8-Bit Vic]]></name>
				<uri>https://chipmusic.org/8-Bit+Vic</uri>
			</author>
			<updated>2012-04-23T18:26:15Z</updated>
			<id>https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/101955/#p101955</id>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: Noob Looking for Criticism]]></title>
			<link rel="alternate" href="https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/101944/#p101944"/>
			<content type="html"><![CDATA[<p>Pretty sweet; but I do not understand the Mario or Cosby reference</p>]]></content>
			<author>
				<name><![CDATA[Jake Allison]]></name>
				<uri>https://chipmusic.org/Jake+Allison</uri>
			</author>
			<updated>2012-04-23T17:31:27Z</updated>
			<id>https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/101944/#p101944</id>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: Noob Looking for Criticism]]></title>
			<link rel="alternate" href="https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/101942/#p101942"/>
			<content type="html"><![CDATA[<p>the hospitality around here is awesome</p>]]></content>
			<author>
				<name><![CDATA[Grymmtymm]]></name>
				<uri>https://chipmusic.org/Grymmtymm</uri>
			</author>
			<updated>2012-04-23T17:10:43Z</updated>
			<id>https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/101942/#p101942</id>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: Noob Looking for Criticism]]></title>
			<link rel="alternate" href="https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/101935/#p101935"/>
			<content type="html"><![CDATA[<p>What&#039;s an 8bc? That&#039;s a non-thing.</p><p>When I was your age we used to play STICKBALL.</p>]]></content>
			<author>
				<name><![CDATA[Solarbear]]></name>
				<uri>https://chipmusic.org/Solarbear</uri>
			</author>
			<updated>2012-04-23T17:02:53Z</updated>
			<id>https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/101935/#p101935</id>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Noob Looking for Criticism]]></title>
			<link rel="alternate" href="https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/101932/#p101932"/>
			<content type="html"><![CDATA[<p>Hey everyone! I used to be a big part of 8bc but its broken for me so now I found this and couldn&#039;t be happier. I will post some of my music right here in links to my youtube. I have many more songs just mp3 format but I wanted to get a few opinions first and get a feel for this site.</p><p>Super Cosby 64: </p><p><a href="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6wztzRCrm-k&amp;feature=relmfu" target="_blank">http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6wztzRCr &#133; ure=relmfu</a></p><p>Thank you all for checking this out and I hope to hear from people soon!</p><p>Enjoy!</p>]]></content>
			<author>
				<name><![CDATA[ChiBear]]></name>
				<uri>https://chipmusic.org/ChiBear</uri>
			</author>
			<updated>2012-04-23T16:16:01Z</updated>
			<id>https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/101932/#p101932</id>
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