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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: Looking for some feedback on a track.]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[<div class="quotebox"><cite>defiantsystems wrote:</cite><blockquote><p>I feel like I&#039;ve heard that first song before. Did you post it somewhere else? It is a bit repetitive but that melody is catchy enough to makes up for it.</p></blockquote></div><p>I&#039;ve just posted it here, and soundcloud that&#039;s it, and thanks!</p>]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[shanebro]]></name>
				<uri>https://chipmusic.org/shanebro</uri>
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			<updated>2012-06-01T22:46:48Z</updated>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: Looking for some feedback on a track.]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[<p>I feel like I&#039;ve heard that first song before. Did you post it somewhere else? It is a bit repetitive but that melody is catchy enough to makes up for it.</p>]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[defiantsystems]]></name>
				<uri>https://chipmusic.org/defiantsystems</uri>
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			<updated>2012-06-01T22:39:42Z</updated>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: Looking for some feedback on a track.]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[<p>Both of them are very good, they get stuck in my head <img src="https://chipmusic.org/forums/img/smilies/smile.png" width="15" height="15" alt="smile" /></p>]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[square0ne]]></name>
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			<updated>2012-06-01T22:23:35Z</updated>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: Looking for some feedback on a track.]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[<p>Looking for some feedback on my latest track.</p><p><a href="http://soundcloud.com/shanebro/ghostly-jam" target="_blank">http://soundcloud.com/shanebro/ghostly-jam</a></p><p>This is the original recording. I&#039;ve since touched it up a little bit, but the original is good enough.</p>]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[shanebro]]></name>
				<uri>https://chipmusic.org/shanebro</uri>
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			<updated>2012-06-01T21:17:30Z</updated>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: Looking for some feedback on a track.]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[<p>Thanks for the response, Vic. I&#039;m glad that you liked it.. and yeah I agree it was a bit too repetitive. I&#039;m working to cut down the repetitiveness in my tracks now.</p>]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[shanebro]]></name>
				<uri>https://chipmusic.org/shanebro</uri>
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			<updated>2012-05-12T20:36:51Z</updated>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: Looking for some feedback on a track.]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[<p>Very repetitive, but catchy.<br />It seems as if there are a few parts that are just thrown in there.<br />I like it though.</p>]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[8-Bit Vic]]></name>
				<uri>https://chipmusic.org/8-Bit+Vic</uri>
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			<updated>2012-05-12T02:59:16Z</updated>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Looking for some feedback on a track.]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[<p>So recently I&#039;ve been putting out a few songs in LSDJ since I&#039;ve finally gotten used to it since I was mainly using famitracker before. I feel like this song has been my most successful. I know I could still improve greatly as far as strong structure, but other then that I&#039;m looking for some feedback in other areas I could improve in etc. etc.</p><p><a href="http://soundcloud.com/shanebro/a-hero-of-few-words" target="_blank">http://soundcloud.com/shanebro/a-hero-of-few-words</a></p>]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[shanebro]]></name>
				<uri>https://chipmusic.org/shanebro</uri>
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			<updated>2012-05-12T02:42:26Z</updated>
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