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Oh and by the way, I haven't studied music or anything like that, but I would like to learn more to help me improve and to understand things better. Do any of you know of some good material to read, like maybe an ebook, and maybe have suggestions as for which topics it might be good to read about.

Complete Idiot's Guide to Music Theory. Read that, and use the ear training CD they provide. Familiarize yourself with the layout of a piano, and read up! It is a fantastic book that taught me theory when I first set out to learn it.

I don't know why you'd love this

haha, well that is on youtube, not on chipmusic.org

I don't know why you'd love this

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Oh and by the way, I haven't studied music or anything like that, but I would like to learn more to help me improve and to understand things better. Do any of you know of some good material to read, like maybe an ebook, and maybe have suggestions as for which topics it might be good to read about.

I did not think it was grotesque, It was just blah

I would step out of the box, and be more "controversial" with your sound

Question... if the general consensus is that "out of the box" music is better and most of the more prolific musicians use that approach... wouldn't that make it "in the box" and "less controversial"?

My biggest complaint is sound design. I have this gripe with a large percentage of LSDJ users but your instruments need more depth. It sounds like you adjusted the Wave Duty Cycle and called it a day. Do some experimentation with tables, add different commands. See what works.

Song wise they aren't terrible but they suffer from lack of variation. All your songs should be a minute and a half long considering you just repeat the verse and chorus over and over. Boring Days Go By, melody wise especially in your chorus, wasn't half bad but it certainly suffers from the previously mentioned repetition.

Keep at it though. Focus on sound design, writing stronger melodies and song structure. My best advice I can give to new people is "would you listen to it?" If not then the song probably sucks.

I would step out of the box, and be more "controversial" with your sound

Edit: Needs a stronger beat. It sounds underdeveloped, like it's a concept for something to be performed by a full ensemble of instruments.

Edit: Hey, if you play guitar or something... ^_-

Edit: Ah I see you just edited you post Well is that the whole reason? I have not yet really discovered my chiptune music genre, so I feel you hit spot on with that comment tbh.

edit: I did not hear a distinct definitive artist in the music, just video game sounds