Auxcide wrote:

JAKEY, OUR BABY IS GROWING UP KINDA.

I know! I'm so proud! *cry years of joy*

<---- Surrogate mother over here 4(^_^)
That'll be two prosounded backlit greyboys, please. A green light from mommy, and a blue-light from daddy

You just don't know... you just don't know... but all of a sudden everything just *clicked* and his natural talent just took off! I could breathe again.

But them labor pains, though...

Auxcide wrote:

JAKEY, OUR BABY IS GROWING UP KINDA.

I know! I'm so proud! *cry years of joy*

bahahahaha, thanks for supporting me from the start

JAKEY, OUR BABY IS GROWING UP KINDA.

I know! I'm so proud! *cry years of joy*

SketchMan3 wrote:

I'm Heading For a Bomb Shelter, I hope you're taking notes! The list of wrongs has significantly decreased, lol.

SIGNIFICANTLY decreased. Good job on this one.

Thanks bro!

SketchMan3 wrote:

It actually sounds like music.

I agree.
Do i see potential? Yes, now i do.

Thanks!

I am glad to please 9-heart kinda

you're actually making pretty damned promising music now.

didn't expect that.

Thanks Man!

I saw a sparkle, and this is the first flame

WHEN WILL OUR TRACK COME OUT!??

EDIT: im also glad to see a good response to a CC thread now

Thanks!

Sorry bro i'm so sick at the moment, i've been at home for 3 days

As am i! i feel respected

I feel cool cause I told him I saw potential before. He just has to work at it and not rush.

Auxcide= Top Bloke

WHEN WILL OUR TRACK COME OUT!??

EDIT: im also glad to see a good response to a CC thread now

didn't expect that.

I'm Heading For a Bomb Shelter, I hope you're taking notes! The list of wrongs has significantly decreased, lol.

SIGNIFICANTLY decreased. Good job on this one.

SketchMan3 wrote:

I'm just curious... do you think :40 would sound better with a more "normal" beat, instead of the kick and snare going at the same time? Maybe the change from laid-back-beat to BLAST-BLAST-BLAST is too abrupt?

That's what I was thinking, because it goes laid back>BLAST>breakdown really quickly. Listening to it again, I can see the appeal, but I think it's the meandering melody mixed with the sudden blast beat that kinda throws me off, you know?

SketchMan3 wrote:

I think the first part would be stronger if it had some bass added after a couple measures, instead of just the lead and drums the whole time. I wonder what kind of bass would fit their, though...

THIS. But I have no idea what bass would fit, either.

Yeah, I see what you mean about the blast beat. Hm. I guess 8am after an all-nighter clouds one's judgement a bit, lol...

As for the other thing, the only thing I can think of is for the bass to just harmonize with the lead (maybe a fifth? Making it an inverted power chord?). Or just do an octave lower. Or maybe even just play an octave lower, but with the notes drawn out twice as long.

I'm Heading For a Bomb Shelter, I hope you're taking notes! The list of wrongs has significantly decreased, lol.

I'm just curious... do you think :40 would sound better with a more "normal" beat, instead of the kick and snare going at the same time? Maybe the change from laid-back-beat to BLAST-BLAST-BLAST is too abrupt?

That's what I was thinking, because it goes laid back>BLAST>breakdown really quickly. Listening to it again, I can see the appeal, but I think it's the meandering melody mixed with the sudden blast beat that kinda throws me off, you know?

THIS. But I have no idea what bass would fit, either.