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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: Critique for first LSDJ composition]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[<div class="quotebox"><cite>Goughy wrote:</cite><blockquote><p>Sounds cool. My cousin says that I can create some kind of echo with the S command (or was it R?). But, i tried that and it just sort of dims the tune and stuff.</p></blockquote></div><p><a href="http://www.noisechannel.org/4409" target="_blank">http://www.noisechannel.org/4409</a></p>]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[PULSELOOPER]]></name>
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			<updated>2012-11-01T23:26:35Z</updated>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: Critique for first LSDJ composition]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[<p>That&#039;s right! I remember reading that in the manual once, but I briefly skipped over it as I was looking for something else.</p>]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[Goughy]]></name>
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			<updated>2012-11-01T19:37:32Z</updated>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: Critique for first LSDJ composition]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[<div class="quotebox"><cite>Goughy wrote:</cite><blockquote><p>Sounds cool. My cousin says that I can create some kind of echo with the S command (or was it R?). But, i tried that and it just sort of dims the tune and stuff.</p></blockquote></div><p>RF# retriggers the note at decreasing volume levels, I believe. #=a number. The lower the number, the more rapid the retriggers.</p>]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[SketchMan3]]></name>
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			<updated>2012-11-01T19:16:50Z</updated>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: Critique for first LSDJ composition]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[<div class="quotebox"><cite>Goughy wrote:</cite><blockquote><p>Sounds cool. My cousin says that I can create some kind of echo with the S command (or was it R?). But, i tried that and it just sort of dims the tune and stuff.</p></blockquote></div><p>You can just create a echo playing with envelopes in the command column, or also with different instruments with different envelope!<br />And i like the song, i like the drums, i dont think that they doesnt fit, but maybe a differents chains for the drums would be cool, but hey, if its your first lsdj song its really nice, its not the usual pulsekicke3sweep with a 4-on-the-floor, go for it, man <img src="https://chipmusic.org/forums/img/smilies/wink.png" width="15" height="15" alt="wink" /></p>]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[Skycstls]]></name>
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			<updated>2012-11-01T18:29:06Z</updated>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: Critique for first LSDJ composition]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[<p>And btw, I think that the drum is definitely sounding too heavy at around 0.35 (right after your drop/spike thing). I would maybe lay it off there, maybe change your drum to a fuller sound or just completely cut it out. That&#039;s really the only part that it doesn&#039;t sound right. It just seems a bit to soon to add in that drum section with that specific sound and stuff.</p>]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[Goughy]]></name>
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			<updated>2012-11-01T18:28:37Z</updated>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: Critique for first LSDJ composition]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[<p>Sounds cool. My cousin says that I can create some kind of echo with the S command (or was it R?). But, i tried that and it just sort of dims the tune and stuff.</p>]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[Goughy]]></name>
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			<updated>2012-11-01T18:21:43Z</updated>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: Critique for first LSDJ composition]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[<p>Thanks, man! Any specific times where you feel like the drums don&#039;t fit? Because the drums have actually seemed like a bit of a problem area to me too in just a few spots. Too redundant or something, I can&#039;t quite figure it out.<br />To be honest, a lot of the echo effect I cheated to get. <img src="https://chipmusic.org/forums/img/smilies/smile.png" width="15" height="15" alt="smile" /> I recorded it track by track into Audition and played around with it a bit in there. The main melody is in the pulse channels actually. The sweeping is just done with the L command. Play with it a bit, it&#039;s pretty good for humanizing things a bit.</p>]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[raster]]></name>
				<uri>https://chipmusic.org/raster</uri>
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			<updated>2012-11-01T17:16:43Z</updated>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: Critique for first LSDJ composition]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[<p>I like it. At some points, I think the drums don&#039;t fit, but otherwise its nice. Question though. First, how did you get that echo effect? I&#039;ve been puzzling over it for ages at no avail. Second, what about that whole sort of sliding sound? Were you using the WAV channel for your main melody? What&#039;s like, the detatails or something on how it&#039;s made. Idk, I like to know how stuff is made.</p>]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[Goughy]]></name>
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			<updated>2012-11-01T17:09:53Z</updated>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Critique for first LSDJ composition]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[<p>Hey all,<br />I&#039;m fairly new to the chip scene and I&#039;ve just finished my first composition in LSDJ. Let me know what you guys think, and how it can be improved upon.</p><p><a href="http://soundcloud.com/rasterbits/the-legend-of-skvoznyak" target="_blank">http://soundcloud.com/rasterbits/the-le &#133; -skvoznyak</a></p><p>I still consider it a work in progress, although the bulk of the work is done.</p>]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[raster]]></name>
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			<updated>2012-11-01T17:03:08Z</updated>
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