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			<title><![CDATA[Re: Feedback on a hardcore chiptune track.]]></title>
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			<description><![CDATA[<b><i>SketchMan3 says:</i></b><p>This is a really old thread.<br /></p><div class="quotebox"><cite>Monotron wrote:</cite><blockquote><p>You can be lighthearted and still make serious music that sounds good, but when you make lighthearted music with no direction and randomly you start heading down a dangerous path to ant1hood.</p></blockquote></div><p>What are you talking about ant1hood is a great place to be. I agree that it is a dangerous path to travel, though.</p>]]></description>
			<pubDate>Mon, 13 May 2013 17:27:17 +0000</pubDate>
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			<title><![CDATA[Re: Feedback on a hardcore chiptune track.]]></title>
			<link>https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/167973/#p167973</link>
			<description><![CDATA[<b><i>Monotron says:</i></b><p>Well better lyrics would help, also better vocals as far as recording. Less repetitive and add some instrumentation variation (That sounds like a school house rock title) and well work on song writing more so than throwing something together in half an hour and yelling over it. Drums/noise channel was good but I would definitely take some time to sit down, and plan the song out. Work on some music theory, even if it&#039;s by ear: </p><p><a href="http://www.noisechannel.org/tag/music-theory" target="_blank">http://www.noisechannel.org/tag/music-theory</a></p><p>You can be lighthearted and still make serious music that sounds good, but when you make lighthearted music with no direction and randomly you start heading down a dangerous path to ant1hood</p><p>The &quot;This Formal Goodbye Would Not Be Complete Without A FUCK YOU&quot; is really good, do more stuff like that.</p>]]></description>
			<pubDate>Mon, 13 May 2013 05:37:00 +0000</pubDate>
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			<description><![CDATA[<b><i>xX 8 BIT CHAMPION Xx says:</i></b><div class="quotebox"><cite>Bit wish wrote:</cite><blockquote><p>whorish self publicity maybe</p></blockquote></div><p>actually no need to get mad. no need</p>]]></description>
			<pubDate>Mon, 13 May 2013 02:16:13 +0000</pubDate>
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			<link>https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/157933/#p157933</link>
			<description><![CDATA[<b><i>Bit wish says:</i></b><p>Full CC: My first impression of the song was that it was a play song, simply for fun, not meant to be taken seriously. If you want CC on songs you shouldn&#039;t say their a joke, especially on this website, the members are old and cranky and don&#039;t like &quot;kids&quot; like us. (Or maybe just the internet in general) I thought the beginning was power full and i felt like it could of turned into an aggressive song. I honestly wouldn&#039;t put this on my iPod VS. your other stuff which seemed more Melodic.<br />I am not a fan of the breakcore/chipcore stuff,so this is just my opinion. If your looking toward more aggressive music i would listen to some more unique stuff... This link here might be more effective then the stuff that they make now. <a href="http://chipmusic.org/forums/topic/935/new-stereochan-release-14std-strassenkampf/" target="_blank">http://chipmusic.org/forums/topic/935/n &#133; ssenkampf/</a><br />The release was made by my friend STereoChan. Who went on to be a very good producer and musician.</p>]]></description>
			<pubDate>Thu, 28 Feb 2013 21:03:19 +0000</pubDate>
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			<description><![CDATA[<b><i>I'mHeadingForABombShelter says:</i></b><div class="quotebox"><cite>Cooshinator wrote:</cite><blockquote><div class="quotebox"><cite>I&#039;mHeadingForABombShelter wrote:</cite><blockquote><p>So, what should i add to make this song better?</p></blockquote></div><p>If it&#039;s a joke then why do you want to make it better?</p></blockquote></div><p>Because man, i want to make good music but i want it to be kind of lighthearted and silly. You get me?</p>]]></description>
			<pubDate>Thu, 28 Feb 2013 20:52:52 +0000</pubDate>
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			<link>https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/157928/#p157928</link>
			<description><![CDATA[<b><i>Cooshinator says:</i></b><div class="quotebox"><cite>I&#039;mHeadingForABombShelter wrote:</cite><blockquote><p>So, what should i add to make this song better?</p></blockquote></div><p>If it&#039;s a joke then why do you want to make it better?</p>]]></description>
			<pubDate>Thu, 28 Feb 2013 20:31:03 +0000</pubDate>
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			<link>https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/157924/#p157924</link>
			<description><![CDATA[<b><i>I'mHeadingForABombShelter says:</i></b><p>So, what should i add to make this song better?</p>]]></description>
			<pubDate>Thu, 28 Feb 2013 20:26:51 +0000</pubDate>
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			<description><![CDATA[<b><i>Bit wish says:</i></b><div class="quotebox"><cite>Cooshinator wrote:</cite><blockquote><div class="quotebox"><cite>I&#039;mHeadingForABombShelter wrote:</cite><blockquote><p>Not meant to be taken seriously, kind of a joke or parody if you will.</p></blockquote></div><p>Then why, out of all songs, did you ask for CC on this?</p><p>And that video gave me cancer</p></blockquote></div><p>whorish self publicity maybe</p>]]></description>
			<pubDate>Thu, 28 Feb 2013 13:33:03 +0000</pubDate>
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			<link>https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/157833/#p157833</link>
			<description><![CDATA[<b><i>Cooshinator says:</i></b><div class="quotebox"><cite>I&#039;mHeadingForABombShelter wrote:</cite><blockquote><p>Not meant to be taken seriously, kind of a joke or parody if you will.</p></blockquote></div><p>Then why, out of all songs, did you ask for CC on this?</p><p>And that video gave me cancer</p>]]></description>
			<pubDate>Thu, 28 Feb 2013 03:51:43 +0000</pubDate>
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			<description><![CDATA[<b><i>Bit wish says:</i></b><p>It was an improvement but i wouldn&#039;t put it on my iPod. If your wanting actual cc i can go full force.</p>]]></description>
			<pubDate>Thu, 28 Feb 2013 03:42:32 +0000</pubDate>
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			<description><![CDATA[<b><i>I'mHeadingForABombShelter says:</i></b><div class="quotebox"><cite>Victory Road wrote:</cite><blockquote><p>yeah the double kicks are going off<br />maybe get a stronger attack going on them</p></blockquote></div><p>Will do</p>]]></description>
			<pubDate>Tue, 26 Feb 2013 21:14:31 +0000</pubDate>
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			<description><![CDATA[<b><i>Victory Road says:</i></b><p>yeah the double kicks are going off<br />maybe get a stronger attack going on them</p>]]></description>
			<pubDate>Tue, 26 Feb 2013 08:49:43 +0000</pubDate>
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			<description><![CDATA[<b><i>I'mHeadingForABombShelter says:</i></b><div class="quotebox"><cite>godinpants wrote:</cite><blockquote><p>Huge improvement on your earlier stuff.</p></blockquote></div><p>Thanks! i&#039;ve been working on improvement <img src="https://chipmusic.org/forums/img/smilies/smile.png" width="15" height="15" alt="smile" /></p>]]></description>
			<pubDate>Tue, 26 Feb 2013 08:33:37 +0000</pubDate>
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			<description><![CDATA[<b><i>godinpants says:</i></b><p>Huge improvement on your earlier stuff.</p>]]></description>
			<pubDate>Tue, 26 Feb 2013 07:19:21 +0000</pubDate>
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			<description><![CDATA[<b><i>I'mHeadingForABombShelter says:</i></b><div class="quotebox"><cite>rasta_dan wrote:</cite><blockquote><p>im actually digging that</p></blockquote></div><p>Thanks man! <img src="https://chipmusic.org/forums/img/smilies/smile.png" width="15" height="15" alt="smile" /></p>]]></description>
			<pubDate>Tue, 26 Feb 2013 06:51:07 +0000</pubDate>
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