<![CDATA[ChipMusic.org - chiptune critique]]> https://chipmusic.org/forums/topic/13416/chiptune-critique/ Thu, 13 Feb 2014 19:10:23 +0000 PunBB <![CDATA[Re: chiptune critique]]> https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/200554/#p200554 HYPERACTIVITY says:

Alright, thanks!

]]> Thu, 13 Feb 2014 19:10:23 +0000 https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/200554/#p200554 <![CDATA[Re: chiptune critique]]> https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/200552/#p200552 Brother Android says:

I don't think they're crap. They are a bit monotonous because your technique isn't very sophisticated, but listening to your most recent tracks vs. your earliest ones, I'd say you're making a lot of progress in terms of both composition and technique. I'd encourage you to explore using more complex instrument voices and effects and more dynamic variation. Also, many of the songs meander quite a bit melodically, and lack much differentiation in sound and feel between different sections, and I think they might benefit from some attention to these areas.

But really, you seem to be doing fine at figuring this out on your own, so just keep at it.

]]> Thu, 13 Feb 2014 19:03:17 +0000 https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/200552/#p200552 <![CDATA[chiptune critique]]> https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/200545/#p200545 HYPERACTIVITY says:

Hey, I’m new to composing chiptunes and it would be much appreciated if I could get a critique on some of my songs, and if you think they are total crap feel free to tell me so.
These were composed using 1 Game Boy DMG and LSDJ.
Thanks! big_smile

http://hyperactivity.bandcamp.com/track … g-of-chaos


http://hyperactivity.bandcamp.com/track/the-fix

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