Alright, so stronger beat, a lead, and let the bells ring.

It sounds pretty good, but I think it could use some finesse in a way. It's kinda rough around the edges. I think I hear some brass or bells in there that could be used to accentuate the feeling and give a kind of "epic" feel; maybe push those up in volume (push everything else down). Perhaps a stronger, more audible beat would help as well. It also seems to lack a strong lead that pounds home the "you're on a journey, it's kind of mysterious" feeling that the rest of the song gives.

So here is a work in progress I have been working on, imagine that, but I think it is missing something, and I just can't figure what.

https://soundcloud.com/ateno/on-a-journey-wip