I'm gathering that you mean the dotted quarter notes in the pattern starting at about 14 seconds?

And that's all right any pointers in the right direction a muchly appreciated.

That dotted quarter note pattern is a tell tale sign of a table without H commands (that isn't a bad thing), just one of those things you can't unhear. A few of my early tracks have that.

Also, sorry I'm not more helpful.  Get into using your wave channel for bass.

Yeah but every AUS musician (chip/otherwise) I've met has been killing it

Just keep doin' what yer doin' guys

Thanks for feedback. will start working on the bassline.

Needs bass

Maybe somebody in aus quit chiptune and gave away their carts.

We're convicts, 'wanting to do better' is in our blood.

But yeah, I've already given CC on facebook. Will be interesting to see what other people have to offer here.

why are there so many australians asking for cc!
; )

I would like to introduce myself. I'm CatchinAshes from Melbourne, Australia.

I have been using LSDJ for about 2-3 months and this is the first time that something i have done that resembles a song.
I realize the only way I'm going to get better, other than practicing is to start getting constructive criticism from other artists.

I very much appreciate you taking your time and listening to my track and giving me feedback this really means a lot.
I understand that I have a long way to go and anything that will help me improve will be taken seriously.

https://soundcloud.com/catchinashes/life-is-changing-v3

Thanks again,
CatchinAshes