Second track: http://chipmusic.org/sonus+silver/music/katabasis

Your first track sounds great and a good source of inspiration. I really like the melody keep it up.

Hello, all! I'm writing some tracks inspired by a novel by Garth Nix called Sabriel. I want it to be a four-on-the-floor album with a relatively dark feel, possibly in the form of a DJ mix—i.e. an album where each track melts into the next. Here's the first track composed for the album: http://chipmusic.org/sonus+silver/music/dads-dead

Any and all constructive criticism is most appreciated. Let me know what you think! I shall post a few more tracks for criticism on this thread over the next few weeks. Thanks!