Yeah, I was thinking the only melody was the ending, and I think it does need some filling up, especially in the earlier parts of it. Thank you!

i'm not sure any of the parts could really be considered a melody line except maybe the bit at the end?

everything loops at 2 measures, so you what you have now is basically textural. that could be cool if you commit to it and really fill up the arrangement, or you could use it as a bed for a longer progression that moves the piece somewhere.

If you feel like it's missing something, add that something.

Hi,
I've recently created a short little song, meant to be upbeat and positive. But I can't help and think it is lacking another melody line or some other part to it to make it better than it allready is. Also, the song is unmixed as of now but i'd rather have some CC on composition before I went into mixing. Any comments are very appreciated!

Song link - https://soundcloud.com/ibeattetrismusic/joy