Oh, I had not noticed I had replies!

It is LSDJ. And thank you for your comments. I don't use a great deal of commands most of the time. Need to get some more practice in with them.

Thank you! I'll play about with it, see if extending that bit sounds better.

I think this is great. Love the composition. I would put a little more of just the noise part between the two melodic sections.

Oh i assume this is LSDJ You should put the system and software your using in the title it'll draw more people into reading!

I'm new to this myself and have unusual tastes so may not be representative. Musically this is good, I'm enjoying the melodies and whatnot but the sounds are some what default for my taste, if that's the sound you like all cool, but I would personally work in some commands to add more variety and such

I'm usually far too scared to request any cc.

But I'm oddly happy with this song, so feel free to shatter my happiness and tell me everything that's wrong with it.

https://soundcloud.com/nostalgicstory/veraramba-demo

Ta muchly!