<![CDATA[ChipMusic.org - I need an honest critique of my remix]]> https://chipmusic.org/forums/topic/17038/i-need-an-honest-critique-of-my-remix/ Wed, 02 Sep 2015 08:09:05 +0000 PunBB <![CDATA[Re: I need an honest critique of my remix]]> https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/234150/#p234150 madpew says:

Totally agree with Boner, this needs drums.
Also the instruments (bassline, keys, vocals) need more seperation in terms of volume, sound and octave.

]]> Wed, 02 Sep 2015 08:09:05 +0000 https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/234150/#p234150 <![CDATA[Re: I need an honest critique of my remix]]> https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/234147/#p234147 Boner says:

1. this is a cover not a remix

2. it's missing the percussion which keeps the entire track moving forward, especially the woodblock on the back beat.

3. either bring the vocal line up an octave so it stands out, or don't make every voice sound exactly the same. the latter is a better option.

as is it sounds like a chiptune player piano version of the song. technically the sequencing is completely fine, it's what you left out that's the issue.

]]> Wed, 02 Sep 2015 02:37:27 +0000 https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/234147/#p234147 <![CDATA[I need an honest critique of my remix]]> https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/234145/#p234145 UBaldur says:

I made a remix of Earth Wind and Fire song September. I think this remix is the best remix i have ever constructed but my friend thinks its absolute garbage. I don't know if i am to attached to my own remix or that I'm right. I can't seem to discern whats great and whats awful . HELP

Link to the song : https://soundcloud.com/ubaldur/earth-wi … ldur-remix

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