<![CDATA[ChipMusic.org - LOOKIN FOR FEEDBACK ON NEW TRACK!]]> https://chipmusic.org/forums/topic/17111/lookin-for-feedback-on-new-track/ Sun, 20 Sep 2015 21:10:50 +0000 PunBB <![CDATA[Re: LOOKIN FOR FEEDBACK ON NEW TRACK!]]> https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/234821/#p234821 ecce homo says:

Let me put it this way: your next darling will be prettier than this one. With that track you had a cool confluence of things going on and just because we criticized it didn't make it less good. It was one well realized idea. Now that idea is a bit muddled. This is the time as an artist where you move on to the next thing and continue to surprise yourself. After a few months you will write some awesome progression and melody and once again not be able to write a B part. You will then have an epiphany that it would go perfectly with this.

]]> Sun, 20 Sep 2015 21:10:50 +0000 https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/234821/#p234821 <![CDATA[LOOKIN FOR FEEDBACK ON NEW TRACK!]]> https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/234781/#p234781 .keanu. says:

https://soundcloud.com/kea-305097452/game-boy-love-song

what do y'all think?

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