<![CDATA[ChipMusic.org - How to improve my Chip Hop song! Feedback please]]> https://chipmusic.org/forums/topic/18092/how-to-improve-my-chip-hop-song-feedback-please/ Fri, 26 Feb 2016 02:54:46 +0000 PunBB <![CDATA[How to improve my Chip Hop song! Feedback please]]> https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/240690/#p240690 Zach Coursey says:

So I made this west coast rap song but I feel something is lacking. While I know it needs to a rapper to really be complete, I think the verses in particular are cumbersome and repetitive. This being said, I don't want to get all experimental with it. Simple 90's gangsta rap. I just feel like the song is lacking in teeth somehow.

https://soundcloud.com/zachcourseymusic … st-1-rough

tl;dr
Give me ideas to spice up my gangsta rap song

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