<![CDATA[ChipMusic.org - Is this track too muddy? - CC for a Returning Writer]]> https://chipmusic.org/forums/topic/18443/is-this-track-too-muddy-cc-for-a-returning-writer/ Tue, 17 May 2016 18:49:30 +0000 PunBB <![CDATA[Re: Is this track too muddy? - CC for a Returning Writer]]> https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/244138/#p244138 JPhardboiled says:

Not too muddy but the sounds are brash and harsh

]]> Tue, 17 May 2016 18:49:30 +0000 https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/244138/#p244138 <![CDATA[Re: Is this track too muddy? - CC for a Returning Writer]]> https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/244053/#p244053 IDecade says:

hi! Mabye you feel the song a little "muddy" because the bass line does'nt reach the low frequencies so it get a little bit confused with the lead part! (just my opinion smile )

]]> Sat, 14 May 2016 22:09:54 +0000 https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/244053/#p244053 <![CDATA[Re: Is this track too muddy? - CC for a Returning Writer]]> https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/243861/#p243861 Pharen says:

Doh! Alright, I fixed it. It should be working now. *Fingers Crossed*

]]> Tue, 10 May 2016 04:59:10 +0000 https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/243861/#p243861 <![CDATA[Re: Is this track too muddy? - CC for a Returning Writer]]> https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/243842/#p243842 HimsyPimsy says:

Link doesn't work.

]]> Mon, 09 May 2016 22:26:42 +0000 https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/243842/#p243842 <![CDATA[Is this track too muddy? - CC for a Returning Writer]]> https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/243838/#p243838 Pharen says:

Hey guys!

So, this is my first post under this alias, hoorah!

I wrote music a while back under a different alias, but then life got in the way a bit and I was forced to stop. I am now able again after a year-ish hiatus and have been working on a few tunes. I have one right here, Atop the Underside (WIP Title).

I feel as though it might be overall a bit too muddy, especially near the end, but I have been going back and forth on it.
Also, is the end missing something? Or is the whole thing missing some kind of more distinct lead? I don't know, I just feel like there is an itch that the end isn't scratching, but I could just be second guessing myself on that one.

This is written in FL (please don't shame me, I recognize my wrongs), for context.

Let me know what you guys think, in general, and to what I referenced. Thanks in advance!

Cheers!

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