<![CDATA[ChipMusic.org - Looking for criticism and insights]]> https://chipmusic.org/forums/topic/19390/looking-for-criticism-and-insights/ Fri, 16 Mar 2018 18:15:20 +0000 PunBB <![CDATA[Re: Looking for criticism and insights]]> https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/255832/#p255832 oxygenfad says:

Awesome energy. This is cool.

]]> Fri, 16 Mar 2018 18:15:20 +0000 https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/255832/#p255832 <![CDATA[Re: Looking for criticism and insights]]> https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/250733/#p250733 Ninten Kwon Do says:

try experimenting with your wav channel and make those kicks punch me in the face real hard.

]]> Tue, 24 Jan 2017 03:53:22 +0000 https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/250733/#p250733 <![CDATA[Re: Looking for criticism and insights]]> https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/250731/#p250731 cr33P0ch says:

Will do, thank you! I think I have a lot of low bass going with the wav channels, maybe switch one of those out? It's just a raw recording, didn't isolate any of the channels and balance them at all. I might try recording the pulse 1 and giving it a little tweak before doing the wav redo?

]]> Tue, 24 Jan 2017 03:15:49 +0000 https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/250731/#p250731 <![CDATA[Re: Looking for criticism and insights]]> https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/250726/#p250726 HimsyPimsy says:

Maybe add a deep kick to bring a bit of movement and structure to the composition.  That may not be what you're looking for though.  Parts of this sound really baddass!

Edit:  After listening to Red Water, just bring the volume of the kicks up a bit.

]]> Mon, 23 Jan 2017 23:17:45 +0000 https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/250726/#p250726 <![CDATA[Looking for criticism and insights]]> https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/250723/#p250723 cr33P0ch says:

Hey all! I've been making chip with LSDJ for a long time now, but get mixed reviews. I'm hoping I can get some thoughts on what to work on or change, or if it's just the genres I'm working with that aren't working. I listen to doom, drone, sludge metal, etc. and have been working to create a fusion with chiptune. Please give this track or any others a listen and let me know! I appreciate anything you have to share!

Love always,
cr33p0ch

https://soundcloud.com/cr33p0ch/red-water

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