<![CDATA[ChipMusic.org - Thoughts on my song?]]> https://chipmusic.org/forums/topic/4378/thoughts-on-my-song/ Sun, 05 Jun 2011 09:34:08 +0000 PunBB <![CDATA[Re: Thoughts on my song?]]> https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/69434/#p69434 Analog says:

your percussion section needs more variation. for not lossing any power you should variate the second half of the 4/4 (open hi-hat and such). also, if the kick gets fuller the sound of the track will evolve a lot.

]]> Sun, 05 Jun 2011 09:34:08 +0000 https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/69434/#p69434 <![CDATA[Re: Thoughts on my song?]]> https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/69415/#p69415 pnada says:

I changed it up a bit, thoughts?
http://soundcloud.com/pranda/toeys-r-tite-dce

]]> Sun, 05 Jun 2011 03:20:06 +0000 https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/69415/#p69415 <![CDATA[Re: Thoughts on my song?]]> https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/69402/#p69402 pnada says:

Thanks for the tips Analog, do you have any suggestions on how to variate the percussion without losing rhythm? Pulselooper, what do you mean by that?

]]> Sat, 04 Jun 2011 23:54:36 +0000 https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/69402/#p69402 <![CDATA[Re: Thoughts on my song?]]> https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/69370/#p69370 PULSELOOPER says:

make more love to the noise channel.

]]> Sat, 04 Jun 2011 20:28:22 +0000 https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/69370/#p69370 <![CDATA[Re: Thoughts on my song?]]> https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/69366/#p69366 Analog says:

interesting WAV channel.

the song is repetitive, which is not a bad thing. but the use of more variation could be interesting. more development is heard near the end, i suggest that you should try it before.

that kick is good, but i guess you can make the percussions better and stand out more, as an important part of the variation and in a more dedicated sound design.

keep it up!

]]> Sat, 04 Jun 2011 19:34:46 +0000 https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/69366/#p69366 <![CDATA[Thoughts on my song?]]> https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/69364/#p69364 pnada says:

Just wondering what you guys think about my song.

http://soundcloud.com/pranda/toeys-r-tite-pce

]]> Sat, 04 Jun 2011 19:09:03 +0000 https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/69364/#p69364