I like this! You've got good melodic sense. That said, the need for skyhooks will become apparent after the cranes are crushed under the immense weight they're trying to carry.

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Utter Mess by Edward Shallow
1. Inside (Leaving) 06:25
2. The Well and Truly Lost 04:17
3. You Are Lost 02:29
4. You've Only Yourself To Blame For Your Tragic Loss In Faith 02:21
5. False Hope 01:20
6. We Need Cranes, Not Skyhooks 03:04
7. Inside (Reprise) 03:38
8. The Living Night Lights 04:22

Thank you for playing.
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