<![CDATA[ChipMusic.org - Just Some Songs I Made]]> https://chipmusic.org/forums/topic/7401/just-some-songs-i-made/ Sat, 09 Jun 2012 02:28:40 +0000 PunBB <![CDATA[Re: Just Some Songs I Made]]> https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/111514/#p111514 The Sky Is Black Not Blue says:
10k wrote:

I think you might need a bit less repetition, or to sing/scream more to overcome some of the repetition.

Thanks a lot i'm definitely going to work on my screams more

]]> Sat, 09 Jun 2012 02:28:40 +0000 https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/111514/#p111514 <![CDATA[Re: Just Some Songs I Made]]> https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/111501/#p111501 10k says:

I think you might need a bit less repetition, or to sing/scream more to overcome some of the repetition.

]]> Sat, 09 Jun 2012 01:31:08 +0000 https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/111501/#p111501 <![CDATA[Re: Just Some Songs I Made]]> https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/111494/#p111494 The Sky Is Black Not Blue says:
SketchMan3 wrote:

@"Diamond Skies Are Enough For Me"
I'm always disappointed when I hear a good melody screamed rather than sung... sad But I guess that just comes with the genre. That's just my personal opinion. It's fun to imagine the implied melody, at least.

I must say, I liked the contrast between the upbeat instrumentation and the angry/angst-ridden/vindictive lyrics. Funny in a subversive.

           
Thanks for your feedback i'm glad you enjoyed it.   

@Amity Level Two

I will work to improve my screams/shouts smile

]]> Sat, 09 Jun 2012 00:28:11 +0000 https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/111494/#p111494 <![CDATA[Re: Just Some Songs I Made]]> https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/111477/#p111477 SketchMan3 says:

@"Diamond Skies Are Enough For Me"
I'm always disappointed when I hear a good melody screamed rather than sung... sad But I guess that just comes with the genre. That's just my personal opinion. It's fun to imagine the implied melody, at least.

I must say, I liked the contrast between the upbeat instrumentation and the angry/angst-ridden/vindictive lyrics. Funny in a subversive.

]]> Fri, 08 Jun 2012 23:04:17 +0000 https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/111477/#p111477 <![CDATA[Re: Just Some Songs I Made]]> https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/111391/#p111391 Amity Level 2 says:

Hi There!
I think you got some good melodies there. As Girl Posse said, better song structure is needed, they build up very boring and static.

May I ask you how old you are?
You should definitely improve your screams/shouts. They just don't sound great. I think It's because of your age.
You need plenty more volume in your voice. Try to shout or scream really loud, don't think at your mom, neighbours or whoever, this helps pretty good!

]]> Fri, 08 Jun 2012 14:28:40 +0000 https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/111391/#p111391 <![CDATA[Re: Just Some Songs I Made]]> https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/111369/#p111369 The Sky Is Black Not Blue says:
Girl Posse wrote:

Definitely work on learning better chord progression, improving song structure, recording quality, and mixing.
Good luck!

yeah, the recording quality was a bit rough, Thanks for your feedback smile

]]> Fri, 08 Jun 2012 07:38:17 +0000 https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/111369/#p111369 <![CDATA[Re: Just Some Songs I Made]]> https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/111367/#p111367 Girl Posse says:

Definitely work on learning better chord progression, improving song structure, recording quality, and mixing.
Good luck!

]]> Fri, 08 Jun 2012 07:36:04 +0000 https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/111367/#p111367 <![CDATA[Just Some Songs I Made]]> https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/111361/#p111361 The Sky Is Black Not Blue says:

Hey everyone smile just released this track tell me what you think, only constructive feedback please smile


http://theskyisblacknotblue.bandcamp.co … -blue-demo

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