<![CDATA[ChipMusic.org - Some criticism please.]]> https://chipmusic.org/forums/topic/8875/some-criticism-please/ Sat, 01 Dec 2012 19:02:18 +0000 PunBB <![CDATA[Re: Some criticism please.]]> https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/144643/#p144643 ilv1 says:

Yeah... Tune sounds cool but the drums could use work... They're too low pitched and muddy and whatnot...

Also, if you have the time, I need some criticism too... Posted a thread in the forums! Thanks!

]]> Sat, 01 Dec 2012 19:02:18 +0000 https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/144643/#p144643 <![CDATA[Re: Some criticism please.]]> https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/144243/#p144243 thebitman says:

Also - an0va has done some good guitar-based work in the past, and rumor has it that we may ever see more in the future.

]]> Wed, 28 Nov 2012 17:26:30 +0000 https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/144243/#p144243 <![CDATA[Re: Some criticism please.]]> https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/144240/#p144240 Jansaw says:
kitsch wrote:

you should check out the music of Danimal Cannon.

This would help you:)
Mixing this stuff can be a pain in the arse, from experience. But if you're after Danimal's sound, I think he'd be more than happy to give you some advice.

]]> Wed, 28 Nov 2012 17:13:06 +0000 https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/144240/#p144240 <![CDATA[Re: Some criticism please.]]> https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/144234/#p144234 chunter says:

You may want to work on making the drums stand out more (not necessarily more drums, just more snap to what is already there,) otherwise I say you're doing it right.

]]> Wed, 28 Nov 2012 16:52:00 +0000 https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/144234/#p144234 <![CDATA[Re: Some criticism please.]]> https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/144225/#p144225 kitsch says:

you should check out the music of Danimal Cannon for some good guitar-laden chipmusic.  incorporating what you already know is never a bad thing,

since you're into guitar and stuff.  just jumps to mind...

]]> Wed, 28 Nov 2012 15:06:14 +0000 https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/144225/#p144225 <![CDATA[Re: Some criticism please.]]> https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/138905/#p138905 Jellica says:

keyboards are pretty much essential if you want to make genuine 100% 8bitchiptunes!

haha sorry smile

looking at your youtube vids you seem to be a good guitarist, so just keep going really, the only thing that i felt needed a lot of work was your percussion in the track.

]]> Thu, 25 Oct 2012 11:14:51 +0000 https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/138905/#p138905 <![CDATA[Some criticism please.]]> https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/138793/#p138793 TheBigSpoon says:

I am a guitarist, and I've always been very interested in VGM/chiptune artist. So I decided to give it a shot. Being new, I'd just like some criticism.

http://soundcloud.com/thebigspoon/vgm_greg_v03

I used Reason 5.0 without a keyboard (not sure if that is essential or not). Thanks for listening!

]]> Wed, 24 Oct 2012 20:35:55 +0000 https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/138793/#p138793