<![CDATA[ChipMusic.org - constructive criticism on this track pls]]> https://chipmusic.org/forums/topic/8936/constructive-criticism-on-this-track-pls/ Wed, 31 Oct 2012 12:52:57 +0000 PunBB <![CDATA[Re: constructive criticism on this track pls]]> https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/139842/#p139842 lastfuture says:

I like the pitch ramps on the noises in your beat. All in all I think the start is a bit rough before it gets smooth sailing, but once it gets going it's a fun ride. The beat has a nice groove. It does have a pretty flat excitement curve though which I think ties in to the feedback from Amity Level 2. There's never a longer break or a part that really shifts things up. It's still fun to listen to though, not every track needs a surprise.

]]> Wed, 31 Oct 2012 12:52:57 +0000 https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/139842/#p139842 <![CDATA[Re: constructive criticism on this track pls]]> https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/139561/#p139561 Amity Level 2 says:

The quality (aspect song writing etc) is good imo, but i think it's missing a final! as the song proceeds, it get a little repetitive.
But i like it!

]]> Tue, 30 Oct 2012 08:31:40 +0000 https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/139561/#p139561 <![CDATA[constructive criticism on this track pls]]> https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/139476/#p139476 shiroshii says:

http://chipmusic.org/shiroshii/music/cellovec

i'd love to know how i can improve my lsdj-ism

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