a lot of the melodies seem to collide&clash and the bassline needs to be more prominent

try to split up the 2 pulse channels via different octaves and instruments

maybe try to make more opposing sections instead of having the same instruments and rhythms the whole way through

Yeah there's a consensus on the drums, and obviously I spent the last time on them. That'll have to change.

basically the problem is that there's no hi hats

Thanks for the feedback, everyone. And bit, your suggestions are definitely taken to heart. Everything is work in progress.

i liked this.   it has a nice driving rhythm.
spooky melody.  my favorite part is the little lead riff at 2:35.

I dig it. You may want to experiment with a "break" pattern in the drums, to me the drums are too spacey, and I was expecting a buildup in the drums leading to 1:50. The current drum part isn't shabby at all, and the rest of the song is catchy. Check your PM's.

I like this.

Nice!  I really dig the part around 1:50.  So good!

Awesome melody.. wasn't expecting too much, but I was pleasantly surprised! Keep it up bro.

First new complete track since 2010, first time using wav bass/kicks instead of drum kits. having 3 tonal channels instead of just 2 is so great, I feel like I cheated my old songs by using drum kits.

let me know what you think.

http://soundcloud.com/8bitdad/faster

edit: I didn't throw down a link.