<![CDATA[ChipMusic.org - Would need some Critic, got Toothpicks.]]> https://chipmusic.org/forums/topic/9268/would-need-some-critic-got-toothpicks/ Sat, 01 Dec 2012 19:05:00 +0000 PunBB <![CDATA[Re: Would need some Critic, got Toothpicks.]]> https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/144644/#p144644 ilv1 says:

0:16-0:56 Needs work... Nothing stands out as a lead or something to make it memorable... The end is very fucking interesting!

Also need criticism. If you've got the time, check out my thread!

- 7C7

]]> Sat, 01 Dec 2012 19:05:00 +0000 https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/144644/#p144644 <![CDATA[Re: Would need some Critic, got Toothpicks.]]> https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/143659/#p143659 DotMatrix says:

has good build up at the beginning. seems a bit too simple for a dance song. I think I can hear a bass channel being used for percussion. (maybe it's not). I'd bring a percussion kit in for the beats, and use the bass channel to add complexity.

now, about that toothpick...

]]> Sat, 24 Nov 2012 17:25:07 +0000 https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/143659/#p143659 <![CDATA[Would need some Critic, got Toothpicks.]]> https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/143647/#p143647 9-Heart says:

Hey,

i'm just working on something. Also tried to be a little bit rockstar. Give me some feedback, i give toothpicks.

https://soundcloud.com/9-heart/9-heart- … k-rockstar

- 9-Heart

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