Thank you. The humanization thing is a good idea. I'll think about it and try using it.

Ummm... I see no CC was given The drums are boring. Too repetitive... Try changing them up just a bit every other phrase or every 4th phrase... Like a question/response conversation. Also the "hats" in the drums are too snare-ish and would've sounded better in a higher pitch... Also try killing the note earlier or lowering the volume on every other hi hat to give it some dynamics and humanization. Sounds good to the ear.

Try fixing the drums and see where you get from there.... To me, it sounds good other than that.

Hey Guys,

So I recently composed a new tune, and took to heart the "variety needed" comments and such. What I want to know is if my new song still needs more variety, and what else I can do to improve (I'm a perfectionist). This is definitely my favourite song that I've made so far.
I composed it in LSDJ on a Nintendo DS Lite.
Here's the link: *Le Soundcloud Link*
What do you think? Please let me know.

Thank you so much

Peace.

-Chip