<![CDATA[ChipMusic.org - Working on my first full-length LSDJ song (Scope)]]> https://chipmusic.org/forums/topic/9962/working-on-my-first-fulllength-lsdj-song-scope/ Thu, 24 Jan 2013 18:22:01 +0000 PunBB <![CDATA[Re: Working on my first full-length LSDJ song (Scope)]]> https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/152458/#p152458 Bit wish says:

Kinda neat for a first track.

]]> Thu, 24 Jan 2013 18:22:01 +0000 https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/152458/#p152458 <![CDATA[Working on my first full-length LSDJ song (Scope)]]> https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/152456/#p152456 3picide says:

First full-length song made in LSDJ. Looking for constructive criticism as I feel some parts are still... off. It doesn't really have any set song or genre that it is modeled after. It is meant to be somewhat dissonant, so keep that in mind.

Some parts sound muddy to me. Not sure what I want to change. Advice/tips/ideas much appreciated!

I'm also not 100% sold on the ending.

https://soundcloud.com/3picide/scope

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