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http://soundcloud.com/ericschn/learning-how-to-use

Only 4 frames so far, kinda going for a water-world/boat theme I guess.

Any suggestions?  I can't decide if I like the slower or faster drums.

I love Famitracker so far, being so limited is actually a lot of fun.

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NC in the US of America

This is cool. I like it. It certainly fits the water theme. Though I'm picturing more of an underwater cave. It works either way, though.

The only suggestion I could give is to modulate up a bit and maybe add a noise kick on the next four frames. I dunno. Personal preference. Maybe vary the pulse width on some parts?

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Brighton | Portsmouth | UK

For a first try this is fucking brilliant

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I really like it, it gives me a sunset at the beach kinda feel. I would change the the snare instrument though, I don't feel like it fits the rest of the instruments. Also, maybe change up the hihat every once in a while so that it doesn't sound like a metronome.

It still is a fantastic track though!

Last edited by Lavar (Aug 13, 2012 8:42 pm)

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California

I like it with the laidback drums. I can't really say much else about it that hasn't already been said, but it really is great for a first track.

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Paso del Rey, Argentina

I like it, It has a very calm mood. I don´t know famitracker, so I don´t know if this is possible, but I think that subtles changes in volume in the arpeggio comping would benefit the piece. In my oppinion, the relaxed drums fit better this mood than making them faster.

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very nice first track!!!