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this isn't my prog stuff so don't run away, but i wanna know if this is boring, overwhelming, silly, too serious, pink, blue, what... and what you'd change about it if you were trying to please less elitist people
i dont think you want constructive criticism, you want LISTENS
and i will give them to you 
I like the coherency of this. I can actually understand it. I think this is non-elitist enough 
It's a perfect blend of leet and common.