Well, here's my latest song that I've pumped out of my CGB. I've taken all the criticism from over the past month and have tried my hardest to create something with a little more structure and dynamic melody.
This is the first time I've also tried adding a bit of gain + bass boost to my music. Also utilized a technique to get rid of background noise generated by my CGB too.
http://www.soundcloud.com/onethreethree/duedates
Enjoy! : ) And please leave any comments pertaining to where I could improve or where I did well!