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Hey guyzz, i feel i've improved greatly with these tracks.
Do you guys think the same? and could i get some advice on what to add to the first track, i'm thinking of adding guitar
https://soundcloud.com/imheadingforabom … dbye-would
http://soundcloud.com/imheadingforabomb … eboy-cover
Thanks and have a good holiday!
Last edited by I'mHeadingForABombShelter (Dec 7, 2012 9:05 pm)
On the first one, you could wait for the last note in the intro to fade out completely before the drums come in. It feels like you rushed in.
On the second one, holy shit, it's a rainbow road cover that got the notes right. You should beef it up with some chunkier sounds so it's not as boring [ Make it actual snescore? 
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Hey I guess you have improved.
Last edited by Xuriik (Dec 5, 2012 11:47 am)
Hey I guess you have improved.
Nice chords on the first one. @0:37 Bass(?) seems like just a random note thrown in completely unrelated to what the chords are doing, but I could just be missing something. Also, while it doesn't feel empty, I feel like it's kind of a waste not to use the 2nd pulse channel for something in the earlier parts of the song. Even just, like, a little pitch bend or sweep to compliment the noise snare (think Megaman). But still, it sounds cool. Nice arps.
Second tune sounds really cool. Bass is nice and bassy. 
Really cool.
As for CC, I feel like snares could be a bit snappier, but that's just nit picking.
On the first one, you could wait for the last note in the intro to fade out completely before the drums come in. It feels like you rushed in.
On the second one, holy shit, it's a rainbow road cover that got the notes right. You should beef it up with some chunkier sounds so it's not as boring [ Make it actual snescore?
Hey I guess you have improved.
1) That's what i did in the original haha, but then people complained about the piano being to long
2) Thanks man, ill mix in some different sounds with that... maybe some guitar! also, the "Snescore" was a joke hahaha
Thanks!
Xuriik wrote:Hey I guess you have improved.
Nice chords on the first one. @0:37 Bass(?) seems like just a random note thrown in completely unrelated to what the chords are doing, but I could just be missing something. Also, while it doesn't feel empty, I feel like it's kind of a waste not to use the 2nd pulse channel for something in the earlier parts of the song. Even just, like, a little pitch bend or sweep to compliment the noise snare (think Megaman). But still, it sounds cool. Nice arps.
Second tune sounds really cool. Bass is nice and bassy.
As for CC, I feel like snares could be a bit snappier, but that's just nit picking.
I should add a sweep, ill do that ahah
and thanks, i like the arps as well!
Just got some guitar done for the first track! take a listen
Just got some guitar done for the first track! take a listen
Wow. That sounds pretty epic. Good stuffs. I think this is a good direction.
I'mHeadingForABombShelter wrote:Just got some guitar done for the first track! take a listen
Wow. That sounds pretty epic. Good stuffs. I think this is a good direction.
Thanks man!
If you haven't heard the guitar version http://chipmusic.org/i%27mheadingforabo … a-fuck-you