Mr. Yes
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Hello folks! I did a thing:


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Good Sky is a short story with a soundtrack. The story depicts true innocence and love of pleasure. The soundtrack depicts love of beeps (it's chiptune).

I've done something like this before, but now I feel much closer to my goal of combining music and writing effectively.

I'm very interested, particularly, in how this combination worked out. I intend to do more.

AndrewKilpatrick
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Brighton | Portsmouth | UK

The music is weak and your syntax is bordering nonsensical, it's a really nice idea but I think you should spend some time refining both parts of this

Mr. Yes
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Thank you, I appreciate it. I will be able to improve both with time, of course.