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Me and my friend jammed together this little ambient track using lsdj and logic pro.
Problem is, we feel like something is missing. Not too sure whether it's in the song structure or instrumentation. What do you guys think?
If you have any feedback to give I would most pleased : D

Thanks in advance

http://chipmusic.org/culture/music/tretat

CasshernTheGuy
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I definitely enjoy this. Just a few tiny gripes though, to be honest.

Those little clicks that sound like a triggered bass drum or rim clicks at around 40s, a little sporadic at times and kinda detract from the feel a little bit. What sounds like a guitar at 1:30 could use a little more treble I feel. That's just my personal preference, though, and others may be fine with the the bulbous sound it seems to make. It feels like there's this hump where the guitar comes out too strong and drowns everything else out. Lowing your mids and raising the hi's in your EQ would help alleviate that.

Otherwise, really nice listen on my first go around! I'll look at it again and see if anything else could use some tweaking. I could be more nitpicky if you need me to be.