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This is my first album and it is called Learning Ground because i learned to make chiptune with those songs !

So its normal if its not a purist 8bit album ! But even if its not a lsdj album i would like to have constructive comment pls !

http://abitstronger.bandcamp.com/

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The last song on this is really good; it has a more interesting and polished sound than the rest, and the weird intro part is my favorite part of the album, even though it is the least chiptune. I also enjoyed the second song. The songs are all mostly pretty simple, though, and I wish they'd develop more and have more elaborate arrangements. Also, there are some parts (especially on songs 3 and 4) where out of key notes have a kind of disruptive effect.

Still, this definitely shows potential. Keep on writing! And don't worry about being purist, I don't think most people here care about that too much.

Last edited by Brother Android (Aug 17, 2013 3:40 pm)

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Wow thank you ! I will keep those things in mind for future creation ! I very appreciate !