Weazel
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Fort MItchell, KY

http://chipmusic.org/weazel/music/kicks … strumental

Thanks for listening and any suggestions or advice is appreciated!

Edit- It was made to be rapped over and if any of you know of someone who might be up to the task I would absolutely love to hear that go down!

Edit Edit - I read the thread on getting better CC and am going to improve this post!

I am satisfied with the intro and the verses. They are repetitive, but that is how I think it should be since I want it to be suited for a hip hop artist to rap over. I think the transition from verse to chorus is okay, but could improve. I am satisfied with the sound design and the effects, but again any suggestion will certainly be considered.  This has also not been mixed down or mastered and any forward advice on that would also be appreciated. I wanted to not do that until I had a vocal track to mix it down with. Thanks for possibly rereading and sorry about not reading the sticky first.

Last edited by Weazel (Dec 30, 2013 9:43 pm)

ShinigamiMachine
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St. Charles, MO

Sounds good! There's a guy who might be a good rapper for it, and he may (if you're extremely lucky) do it for free. His name is Andrew Huang and he has incredible talent.

His YT (so you can preview all his styles): www.youtube.com/songstowearpantsto
One of his cool raps: www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z8-WtH4ujps&feature=c4-overview-vl&list=PLW9UYOmoXTQlpsev3xbI3nax_D35IEpkj
Contact: http://www.songstowearpantsto.com/contact/

Last edited by ShinigamiMachine (Jan 22, 2014 10:48 pm)

Weazel
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Fort MItchell, KY

Thanks a ton! I messaged him.

PleaseLoseBattle
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Clermont-Ferrand, France

I'd like to hear your stuff with a rapper indeed. Nice job !

Dire Hit
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Seattle, WA

This track is rad, the only advice I can give is to vary the hihats more throughout the song, it gets a little old about halfway through. Maybe some trap style snare rolls as well.