J3wel
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I've been writing tracks using LSDJ since the middle of last year and wanted to see if I could get some feedback for a few of the tracks I've recorded? Its not everything I've written but the three below are a selection!

Kerfuffle:
https://soundcloud.com/j3wel/kerfuffle

Tripped:
https://soundcloud.com/j3wel/tripped

Light Tears:
https://soundcloud.com/j3wel/light-tears

Any feedback or CC would be greatly appreciated, especially considering I'm intending on doing open mic nights soon as well as my slot on the open stage at Grok day!

J3wel

cokeandaspirin
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Buenos Aires - Argentina

i liked em tongue

J3wel
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Cheers man! Which was your favourite?

cokeandaspirin wrote:

i liked em tongue

cokeandaspirin
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Buenos Aires - Argentina

light tears

lucasnoah
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Michigan

I really like light tears and kerfuffle. Very tastefully tracked, my friend. Keep it up!

Dire Hit
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Seattle, WA

Listened to light tears, you've got some good things going. This is advice people give a lot, but volume control really goes a long way. Turning down your pulse and noise instruments would really help the kick stand out, because right now it's pretty tough to hear.

J3wel
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Dire Hit wrote:

Listened to light tears, you've got some good things going. This is advice people give a lot, but volume control really goes a long way. Turning down your pulse and noise instruments would really help the kick stand out, because right now it's pretty tough to hear.

Awesome thank you! Nice to hear I'm doing something right smile