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So my old band broke up a little bit ago (I'll post this link one more time for the folks in the back) http://sludgemetalicecreamtruck.bandcamp.com/

and now im doing this new thing http://timmyandtherobotband.bandcamp.co … ot-band-ep
and im having a good deal of trouble writing so i figured getting other peoples opinion on my current project and other peoples opinion on what i could do to improve might help. thank you for your time