DeltaVii
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Portland, OR

Hey everyone. I recently finished my first song, and was wondering if there was any constructive criticism you guys could give.
I've been going for a WMD-ish vibe.
Hopefully nothing is off- the second part (past 2:20 or so) might be. The general feeling should be dream-y so I hope that gets conveyed out.

Here's the link: https://soundcloud.com/deltavii/hiraku

Thanks!

Last edited by DeltaVii (Nov 21, 2014 2:58 am)

Cortuor
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Link? tongue

DeltaVii
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Portland, OR
Cortuor wrote:

Link? tongue

Wow, I can't believe I forgot the most important part xd. Edited, thanks.

Cortuor
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I really enjoyed that! Left some feedback for you.

Michael's Music
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United States

DeltaVii, that's a pretty Chinese motif you've got going there. Pleasant on the ears.

JodyBigfoot
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Its really nice man, you need to learn to DUB! tape echos with pan between the ears, reverb and filters. echoes and spring/plate reverb make dreams come true!
there is some good examples of dubbing in this recent EP by Helgeland 8 Bit Squad (i did the art work tongue)
https://soundcloud.com/helgeland8bitsqu … /2020-ad-1

and some more traditional dub links
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vo0w0hd4iuo

this on is amazing

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RsbTm-2 … mzplM9kUWw