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Minneapolis, MN

Hey guys, finally released my 2nd full album "Galactic Girl" give it a listen!

https://teomawki.bandcamp.com/album/galactic-girl
https://soundcloud.com/teomawki/sets/galactic-girl

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Minneapolis, MN

Anybody have thoughts or comments?

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A pleasant array of songs. Your composition is a strong point for sure and it is what makes this a nice album. I would spend more time creating a more dynamic set of instruments, I think you should experiment with the noise channel in particular.

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Last edited by Apeshit (Jul 17, 2019 12:21 am)

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Minneapolis, MN

Thanks for the feedback guys! And I do intend to work with my noice channel, it is normally an afterthought for my songs, but Ill try to expand it!

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Montreal, Canada

I like the music. Catchy little tunes.

I find the sound a bit raw however. I think these songs could benefit from detail work. First things that come to mind are:

1) Volume envelopes that sustain at a softer volume. A lot of the sounds hit at full volume and sustain there. After a while it gets a bit overwhelming.
2) A bit of vibrato here and there on your leads
3) Some classic single-tap "tracker echo" effects would be nice too