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Yes I know I should give it a proper title first. Anyways here's my first decent lsdj tune https://db.tt/YE9MLLYY . Let me know what you think.
It was made during the summer, I just didn't upload it for a while.
Last edited by IceWolf (Nov 23, 2015 3:05 pm)
I'm super into the swells and the noise but the melody and arps are often not in key. At first I thought it was intentional but by the end it's clear that either it wasn't or the idea is overused and doesn't work. The noise channel is really good but I would revisit the melody. What are you going for with the melody exactly? Did you want it to be dissonant?
Last edited by ecce homo (Nov 25, 2015 9:16 pm)
Well I thought the melody (wav channel sounds) with the telephone-ish arps worked. Didn't really have a plan for the track, I just wanted to make a cool tune.