Hi guys! I am doing chip music with pxtone for 2 years. I want you to share opinion about my music. I just need to know if i am making some good sounds or crap. Here's a link : https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8fqGzF0mfVw
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I really like this song, though it does feel like it has little to no progression after a while. Also, possibly make the transitions a little bit more.. smooth? I don't know how to describe what I'm saying here... But whenever a melody kicks in it quite obviously starts abruptly. There's not much of a transition as much as it's just BAM new element! or BAM! change!
I hope that's helpful, but I have to say, I enjoyed listening to it all the way to the end. 
Keep it up! (Also, your cover of Undertale's Megalovania popped on after your original song and I have to say you did a fantastic job covering that!)