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melbourne, australia

http://maddestkingsalive.bandcamp.com/track/bug-out

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Philly, PA, USA

o ok

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Melbourne, Australia

Yeah bwoi! Diggin it fenners. Nicely done.

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Sounds great! Maybe add some more present percussion?

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Melbourne, Australia

Um... I don't think he is looking for constructive criticism. tongue

The track is finished and available for purchase.

EDIT : except for the fact that this is the CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM SUB FORUM! *smacks forehead*

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hardcore, Australia

So maybe this should be moved to "releases".

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Melbourne, Australia

Good call. Totally missed that. My apologies apt-get. Very rarely do I even notice what sub-froum I'm in. "Recent Post", damn you!

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melbourne, australia

wink this is true but I am also looking for criticism so my next one is better.

what do you mean by present percussion?

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Melbourne
ninjaspew wrote:

wink this is true but I am also looking for criticism so my next one is better.

what do you mean by present percussion?

maybe percussion that 'unwraps' to reveal a gift inside?


edit: you should have called it "chubby dip". will grab this tonightahh

Last edited by pselodux (Mar 31, 2011 3:59 am)

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Melbourne, Australia
pselodux wrote:

you should have called it "chubby dip"

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melbourne, australia

unwrap yr chubby

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Hahaha chubby dip. Sounds like some kind of potato chip accessory.

@celsius: Oh silly you smile I totally understand, I used to do that all the time on this one forum before I learned my lesson

@ninjaspew: Well, basically I mean to have it more...there. For me, a fast, punching drum track really gets me, but that's not right for everyone. However, most people agree that a driving drum track really adds to a great song. Try throwing in a traditional DnB beat somewhere toward the middle of the song

Edit: Traditional DnB beat at 2:57 in this video...don't worry about what he's talking about, I'm pretty sure you're not using this program.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Pe3Kg52uqNs

Last edited by Frostbyte (Mar 31, 2011 4:09 am)

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melbourne, australia

ha I actually watched that video whilst I was making this song

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Really? Nice! Is that the program you're using?

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Melbtown, Lolstralia

amazing fenners!! really like it, I would love it if the sub bass had slightly longer notes in parts (maybe I just need to listen with a sub) but if they were just given a bit more time to really destroy peoples stomach fluids that would make me happy

also fuck a traditional DnB this has a really original chubby dip riddim to it

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Melbourne

chuuuuuuuubbbbbbyyyyyyyy

when that sub comes in.. aw shiiiiiit. and the beat at 3:05!!

can't wait to hear this live!