sunset sara
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yayyy my first E.P.! big_smile
i wrote and recorded this all last afternoon, it's about a day i had in the park with a boy i really like. :]

http://www.mediafire.com/?o3qd8e3iglyqt8i

01 car ride (he picks me up)
02 park afternoon (relaxing in the shade)
03 summer evening (watching the sunset with him)

PLZZZZ tell me what you think, i know it's not great but i'm doing my best! i've been listening to a lot of anamanaguchi and this guy rugar, i think it shows haha ;p

seriously i hope you like it! CHEERSxoxo
s(^.~)V

kineticturtle
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Matthew Joseph Payne

This is simple, but super cute. Definitely tells the story, for sure!

I think it's time for you to start getting away from sampled drums and really start digging into what the WAV and noise channels can do. smile

DeMarko
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BRKlyn

this is cute, somewhere in the middle of part 2 I started skipping ahead hoping you would use another note. Like kineticturtle says, you might want to explore those WAV and noise channels a bit.

Also, just a nitpicky point: this is more of a 5 minute track with 3 parts than it is an EP, but that's mostly a personal opinion

BR1GHT PR1MATE
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BOSTON

TOO CUUUUUUTE wink wink wink wink

sunset sara
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aww thanks guys! i'm glad some people downlaoded big_smile

i know i should do more exciting stuff, i decided to just do three channels (i'm not that good yet, but i'm working on my wav channel)
but i'm trying to get good like everyone else on here! thanks again smileheart