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Abandoned on Fire

I'm not usually one to ask for a critique but I'm trying to step up my game.  This short track is a good example of where I'm at right now.  What's missing?  What needs to be emphasized?  Sound quality?

Thanks in advance!

http://egrmusic.bandcamp.com/track/ded- … le-version
(LSDJ on classic gameboy)

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Abandoned on Fire

Lots of listens but no comments... I choose to interpret that as "fucking awesome don't change a thing!"  tongue derp