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(12 replies, posted in Constructive Criticism)

Thanks for all the feedback, everyone!  I really appreciate it.

RJL wrote:

Pretty good,  have you considered adding some sort of beat to it?

Is the background synth that plays throughout the track a C64?  I can get some similar sounds with Cynthcart on the C64.

It is! I found a C64 emulator vst on the web.  And thanks for the feedback, I definitely want to try making the song go towards a new sound near the end, along the same lines of what Doxic and GDNGHTLMPLGHT said.  I want it to build into something new.

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(12 replies, posted in Constructive Criticism)

Awesome! I'm glad you like it. I'm hoping to make a summer project out of something like that.

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I wrote an ambient, minimalist chiptune track.  Lately I've been spending more time writing soundscapes than anything else, so I was curious on hearing what y'all's thoughts were.

https://soundcloud.com/sickynar/ohmu-1

Hope you like it!