I am very curious if anyone thought the chorus even works with this kind of bass-line. I'm also aware of the fact that it needs a better bridge around the middle. And of course, I'm curious to know if people like the song thus far. In other words: Desperately in need of constructive criticism. I'd much appreciate if you give your opinion smile Thanks in advance and hope you enjoy

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I think this turned out OK smile The problem I have is that I`m just not that great with using the WAV channel. I wanna know what you guys think. And if anyone has some advice or tips, please share them with me^^
Made with LSDJ on an unmodded DMG.


I heard these forums were great to get some good criticism. I was hoping you guys could tell me how you liked this smile Admittedly, it's not a very original song, but I think it turned out ok.
P.S.: I`ve seen some people post there song in these forums as a pretty player. But how?

EDIT: Player works :] Thank you Subway Sonicbeat

All I can say is: Make more! I seriously love it!