First full-length song made in LSDJ. Looking for constructive criticism as I feel some parts are still... off. It doesn't really have any set song or genre that it is modeled after. It is meant to be somewhat dissonant, so keep that in mind.

Some parts sound muddy to me. Not sure what I want to change. Advice/tips/ideas much appreciated!

I'm also not 100% sold on the ending.

https://soundcloud.com/3picide/scope

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(4 replies, posted in Constructive Criticism)

It's not bad for a first song. I suggest playing around with the instruments. Try and get comfortable with the interface more and then try to learn commands and tables to really flesh out those instruments. All in due time, of course!